Studio Brief 4 - Final Crit

Crit Feedback 

Final Outcome

Crit 

Within the crit it was said that the finished product looked like something that would be bought. It was also said that the booklet was informative and useful and that they would have liked to have had a copy of it at the start of the year. It was said that the simplicity of the design was effective with less text and more imagery. It was said that the use of only black and white photocopied prints would make the outcome inexpensive to mass produce. It was questioned whether the contents page was supposed to be wonky however this was deliberately done to reflect the other angled photocopies within the book. To make this link further possibly some black background could be introduced into the contents page by re-positioning it on the photocopier bed, creating consistency across the image pages and the contents. It was also said that the design was really consistent and used an appropriate typeface. It was also suggested that perhaps a section on sketchbooks could be added explaining the importance of them. It was said this could be achieved using a series of sketches.