Studio Brief 2 - Interim Crit

Crit Feedback

In crit feedback both the atom design and the corridor of time designs were said to be effective. It was suggested for the corridor of time should use a different colour. For the atom design it was suggested that I look at Feynman diagrams for reference.It was suggested that a way of incorporating text would be to put either letters or numbers within the circles as seen in atomic diagrams. It was also said that I could use photography within the poster whether this be layering the design over an image of the place or creating a sculpture of the diagram than placing it within the site and photographing it there. For reference Aliyah Hussain was suggested who creates geometric sculptures which are then photographed in different environments. It was also suggested that possibly the design could be cut and folded so it became physically three dimensional within the poster.