Studio Brief 1 - To Kill a Mockingbird - Interim Crit

Crit Feedback

It was said that both the photographic and the photocopied designs were effective, however there was more interest in the photocopied work. It was suggested that the typography could be arranged differently on the cover as it looked a little unbalanced. It was said that the design should wrap around onto the back cover to continue elements across the double spread making it consistent. Playing with balance, symmetry and a lack of it in the design, it was suggested,  would be a good way of  working out the layout of the elements. 

Raf Rennie was an designer that was talked about and it was suggested that maybe the typography could be altered or parts could be erased in a similar way to his work.